100 word challenge

I was walking in the forest when I suddenly I was stuck in a gooey and smiley dungeon I was covered with it then I heard something it heard like a giant and it was.I screamed with terrier and the giant roared with a big  he said what shall I eat today a human been will be nice I wanted to scream but I could not nothing came out then a another big giant . I tip toed out of the enormous 
  room then more trouble came more giants I accidentally bumped in to one I was lucky because it wad a friendly wan then he picked me up a took me outside and tolled me to go I said I can't I don't know the way back the giant said I well take you so we went.          
My Reflection I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing. I found this tricky because I was trying to find the correct spelling for the words. In this activity I had to use at least three interesting adjectives in my writing. My next steps in my writing are to add more dealt to my work by adding some onomatopoeia and verbs.

A moment in time taking off in a plane

My Reflection I was learning to use my five senses to add detail to my writing. I found this easy because it was easy to retail my holiday in small words.
In this activity I had to use 3 senses saw heard felt and wondered. My next steps are to add more detail to my work.